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Submitted: May 23, 2009
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61by ~TotoRino

Photography / Abstract & Surreal / Surreal

Daily Deviation

Given 2009-08-22

The suggester wrote, "61 by =TotoRino is a beautifully haunting depiction of those moments we are but shells, ghosts of ourselves." ( Suggested by ~Jeannieblue and Featured by `opioid )

Critique by ~Hano-Mayonaka Aug 22, 2009, 1:52:54 PM

This is an absolutely beautifully done work... Let alone atmosphere, your perspective is nice and even, giving a nice tunnel effect through all four doorways...

The dust on the ground in huge clumps, the decrepit wall, the loose pebbels, stones and lonely pieces of framework scattered about truly give the sense of a desolate, abandoned area...

The lighting also gives the effect of a rundown building, letting in natural sunlight from a gaping hole... Absolutely brilliant...

Now, the one thing I must point out, as this is a critique, not a gushing at how pretty your work is, the haunting figure seems just a tad out of proportion, a minute shading in the arms make the figure seem that its hands go beyond its knees...
But more obvious, the head is much more smaller compared to the body, it should be a tad bigger to match the proportion of the chest...

I'm still impressed however at the way you managed to create a human figure from nothing (I should assume) and give it its lonesome, ghastly appearance...

Oh and congrats on the Daily Deviation... ^^

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